Mon devoir à la maison d'anglais

Jean a écrit:Tu es professeur d'anglais ?

merci beaucoup dans tous les cas.

Jean a écrit:A day of automn, my father died from famine in age of 42 years. Before died , my father often repeated me: « To earn your living, it is necessary to have its own earth, I trust you. ».I lived in Queenstown in Ireland and my father and me worked for a rich owner in this epoch and we were to scourge levy... When I was child, I saw a lot of boat leaving towards the United States. Shortly after the spring, my friend Jeff Huncley said that in the United States gave to all from the earth for those they deserved it. I was enraptured of this news. On June 14th, 1911, I decided with my friend to go in the United States, and start from scratch. One of the nicest and of the biggest liners of epoch was in front of me, unsinkable Olympic. It had made stopover in our harbour and luckily, I had hearing it to speak harbours by sailors one month before. They said that was his trip inauguration. And it is true, he was splendid, imposing, big and very luxurious. I had bought my ticket grace from the savings of the family. The ticket cost 30 dollars. I am to pass by l 'inspection health as it was usage for the passengers of 3rd class. I was on the prow and I looked at dear Ireland, one last time. The liner started and a thick to smoke exit of chimneys and we began our big crossed towards the United States. With Jeff, we went for a walk on the liner seeing the sea only as far as the eye can see. For the 3rd classes, we were well LOTIE, in deed, we had simple rooms. A rather ample room.
There was two DOUCHE for all passengers of 3rd class. One big dining room or they were served! And the most impressive, was the rooms of 1st class. In evenings, people of 3rd classes were reunited in a room where they dance all night by drinking Irish beers with Irish music played by a group musician. At the end of 4 days, we arrived New York. I was on the prow of the boat and I saw the statue of freedom. i can not to believe it. My paper is regularize , I had to go to Ellis Island. I followed one certain numbers of évalution medical, linguistic... And my name was Americanized John Evens. I visited New York, and i have been dreadfully disappointed. A dark city, remplient the following day of people intoxicate. I left New York by the train to go towards west or l 'on still gives lands...

Jean a écrit:Merci merci beaucoup x)

Pour une fois , j'aurais une bonne note , histoire de remonter mon 8.5 de moyenne en anglais =)

Edit : Faut-il mettre Trust ou Trust somebody ??